How to Edit a Paragraph
To learn how to edit a paragraph, it’s important to identify what needs to be changed. It’s not as hard as you think. Try this:
Which of these paragraphs do you like better?
It is a fun activity. Rollerblading can be done any time of year. It is hard to do at first. It requires a lot of strength and energy. Rollerblading can be dangerous if you’re new at them. Rollerblading is fun after a while. The reason is they help make you strong and gives you confidence.
Rollerblading is a fun activity which can be done any time of year. It is hard to do at first. A lot of strength and energy are required to do it. While dangerous in the beginning, in-line skating is fun after a while. The reason is it helps make you strong and gives you confidence.
If you said the second one, there is a good reason. There are some simple strategies to make easy changes to turn a not-so-good paragraph into a paragraph that is easy to follow and engaging for the reader. So, when your teacher says “Fix this!” or “Edit that!” just click on the tips below for more information and examples on what to do to make your paragraphs better.
- Don’t use pronouns in your topic sentence. Your audience should be able to tell what the paragraph is about by reading the topic sentence. If you use a pronoun, they won’t know the topic.
- Keep your number straight. If your pronoun refers to a singular or non-count noun, use it or this. If your noun is plural, use they or these.
- Replace pronouns with synonyms.
- Change the subject of the sentence. The sentence subject doesn’t have to be the topic of the paragraph every time. Start your sentences with different words. This will help you add variety to your writing and make your paragraph more enjoyable for your audience.
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